Welcome back to another blog post today I have something to show you guys. By the way how are you guys i am going to show you my student Hotspot doc. This is last Friday here is what I write today hope you like it and this is my goal.
- Only use capitals for proper nouns ( names and ‘I’ ) and the start of a sentence.
- I use punctuation as I write each sentence and re-read to check my punctuation.
Last night me and my dad were watching Tv with my Nephew Racaius He had a toy car.
He hopped on the car and went back and forth. He was near the Tv was he was in front of
the tv when he went back and forth he hit his head and fell to the ground. I laugh hard out
and my mum said GRAB HIM NOW. and then I stopped laughing and my mum said ( it is
not funny he has a bump on his head)
He hopped on the car and went back and forth. He was near the Tv was he was in front of
the tv when he went back and forth he hit his head and fell to the ground. I laugh hard out
and my mum said GRAB HIM NOW. and then I stopped laughing and my mum said ( it is
not funny he has a bump on his head)
I Hope you like my blog post please give my a comment
Hey Christina,
ReplyDeleteI liked your blog post because it was funny but it was really sad that you laughed at your nephew. But You need to work on re-reading it before you post it but other than that is was amazing. keep it up.
Kia Ora Christina,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your Blog Post because It was easy to read.
Something you need to work on is re - reading your writing because there is a lot of mistakes and instead of say " Me and my Dad. You could say My dad and I.
Are you Proud of your work?
Thank you, Susie and Finau for commenting on my blog i really appreciate it so much i think i am going to comment on you blog post and i will re-read my blog post when i post it promise you ok.Bye
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