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Thursday, 10 September 2020

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Hola A Todos,

Today I am going to talk to you people about my writing. I have been working on my writing for 7 week. I am trying to finish my novel study work but i'm working on my blog talking to you guys about my work. I would love to show you what I have done. I'm actually writing a horror story.


~{MY HORROR STORY}~

  

Once there was a 16 year old girl called Kierna. She was getting ready to go to school  and when she was getting dressed she opened up this tiny little door that was in her house that her parents didn't allow her to open that tiny door for three weeks when they moved in the house . She opened it up and she found a doll called Sabrina. 


She looked up what the sabrina doll does and when they were made and she found out that this doll was made 1978 she was so scared when she found out the doll was made in 1978 .She took out the doll and said “You look like Zendaya had the worst surgery ever”. So she threw the doll in the trash & when she turned around the doll was sitting  on her bed staring at her evilly.


She said ¨Omg how did it get there I just left it in the trash¨so then she left to go school saying to her friend “ I found this weird doll in this tiny tiny door I have in my room “ and her friend said “ Ohh that tiny door in your room” and Kiernan said “ Yeah it's weird that someone left their doll there”. 


Her friend said “ we should go see if the doll is still in your room “ and Kiernan said “ yeah it should be there”. So after school they went to Kiernan’s house. When Kiernan opened the door they went up the stairs and they looked around looking for the doll and Kiernan said “ Where is the doll I swear I put it on my bed “. 


They still went to find the doll & they found it ( YAY about time ). They found it on the kitchen table with shattered glass around the doll. Kiernan’s friend said “ I thought you said you left it on your bed” and Kiernan said “ Yeah I did I swear you left it on the bed I swear I did I'm not lying”.


Kiernan’s friend said “ Ok i’m just gonna leave you here so you can get eaten alive” and Kiernan said “ Wait don’t leave me here with this - this scary ,ugly and terrifying doll I don’t want to die I want to have kids when i’m older ” Kiernan ran to the bathroom she locked the door.


Yelling out “ WHY ARE YOU HERE WHY DID YOU CHOOSE ME?” . When she stopped yelling she could hear someone walking near the bathroom door. She could also hear someone dragging a sharp object on the ground. She knew that her friend left early because she was scared of the doll.


Kiernan looked under the door and she saw someone standing there with a knife she started crying  saying “ Why are you here in my house what are you here for” and the doll started to laugh and giggle at the girl saying “ I'm going to possess you because I have nobody to share my haunted soul with¨.


Kiernan said “ Please leave this house, go find someone else but just not me”. Kiernan unlocked the door and  kicked the doll so it would hit the wall. She ran up stairs and the doll looked on the right trying to get to the girl. Kiernan called the cops yelling at her phone waiting for the police to come and get the doll or call a priest.


She hung up the phone and  when she did she couldn’t hear a sound coming from downstairs so she opened the door and  went to go check out what's happening downstairs. When she went downstairs she saw nothing but shattered glass saying i'll be back for you next time….


She was so scared. So she ran up to her room and  locked her door , Put chairs , and tables on the door so no one came in like the doll. When she fell asleep she heard nothing but when she fell deep into her sleep the doll came out of nowhere when she was asleep on her bed. The doll was floating on top of Kiernan when she was asleep. 



The doll opened up Kiernan’s mouth with its capability and threw up bad stuff in her mouth. So then Kiernan scared herself awake, she felt dizzy after the doll threw up in her mouth. She didn’t know it was the doll so she went to her bathroom and looked in the mirror and  said “ Eww what's that stuff in my mouth”.


She thought it could be the food I ate last night before bed ( she didn’t know ). She went outside looking everywhere for her friend. She knew her friend had left because of the doll but inside of her something felt like her friend was still there waiting for her in her room.


As soon as she started looking it was night time and it was raining , lighting . Kiernan’s neighbours were walking and they looked at Kiernan’s windows and they couldn’t see her anywhere. Until she popped up from her roof looking like she was throwing up and her veins were popping out of her face, her cheeks were red like blood. 


So the girls called a priestess called Kayla. Kayla was 35 years old and she works as a priest. She came really fast in her car. So she came out of her car and ran inside, She couldn’t find her anywhere so when she turned around she looked up and Kiernan’s body jumped on Kayla and closed the door with her capability. 


So Kayla kicked  Kiernan off her stomach so Kayla could run upstairs and get her powerful necklace. Kiernan ran upstairs so she could follow Kayla. Kayla got her necklace out and waited for  Kiernan to crawl in the room so she could put the necklace on her forehead and then pray to Jesus to help her.


 Kiernan crawled fast in the room and looked everywhere for Kayla but Kayla was behind the door so she could close and lock the door so Kiernan’s possessed body fell into Kaylas trap. So kayla jumped on  Kiernan’s body and put the necklace on her forehead. 


Kayla was praying and asking for help. So Jesus shined a light onto Kiernan . Kayla hopped off  Kiernan and  Kiernan’s body was floating in the air . Kayla said “ Thank you Jesus you can let her down now”. So Jesus let her down and  Kiernan was throwing up the stuff that affected her body. Then the ambulance came and asked her a few questions. Kiernan said “ Thank you for helping me” to Kayla and Kayla said “ Your welcome that's what I do for people”.


THE END…..



I'm going to show you people my drawings I have done for my story.


That is my hero called Kayla

That is my Villain called Sabrina but there is a evil spirit in it and her name is called Bathsheba.

I really enjoyed doing this because it was really really fun and it makes me happy. I want to do this again someday cause it makes everyone in my class happy and joyful.I like my writing and drawing because I feel like i'm being more open about myself. I am really proud of my work. Have a great and wonderful day BYEE!!!..



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