100 Word challenge

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Hey everyone welcome to my new blog post. This blog post is about writing. My class has been working on this since yesterday the writing is all about someone in the rain and a grey car that the person did not recognize pulled up beside the person my person is a boy, The boys name was billy, Billy was frighted when the grey car pulled up I would love to show you my work about billy and a grey car he did not recognize pulled up beside him. My story is called The Driver.

Here is my work.

My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognize pulled up beside me. The Person wined down the window and told me to go to the car in front of the window. As soon as I walked up to him I saw that he looked a little disillusioned at first I thought he was going to walk out of the car door so. If he would do that I would be running for my life I wanted to walk home but he kept on talking to me saying “come with me”.

My Teacher Miss D write down some things I need to work on and here they are.

Positive: You are trying to make your writing clear by
re-reading and changing your sentences.

Next step: To not use the same words over again and repeat the same idea.
Use an important idea only once.

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