Hola a todos,
Today I am going to show you my writing. We are learning to write in past- progressive tense use powerful action verbs only include what is powerful, meaningful and important My writing is about a girl having a bad dream and when she wakes up it becomes real.
Here is my writing.
“No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream.
I was screaming because I had a dream I ever had
a dream
about paranormal things,
I think it's because I keep on watching
scary movies too much.
I went back to sleep and it was still taking
me back to the dream and
I got scared so
I got up and went to the
kitchen to get a drink of
water and I looked out of the window and
I saw someone standing outside
the kitchen window
it was looking at me and
I was grasping
when I looked at it and I when I was looking at it,
it had a bag over its head and on
the bag there was
chains on it there was
blood on the chains.
So I called my dad and said
“ Dad someone is standing
outside the kitchen window” and
my dad said, “ What does it look like” and I said “
It has a bag over its head
with chains on it
and there is blood on the chains and
he is in a dirty and ripped suit”
And my dad kept on interrogating
me about what it’s doing .
So I yelled out the my brother to
come into the kitchen but
when I yelled out and looked away
there was another one standing right
in front of me. The end
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