Today I am going to show you my personification writing doc out writing doc was about a talking mountain that was in a deep voice but like in a old mans voice. I would like to show you my doc for what I have done to my Collaborative Writing.
Here is my work about the mountain talking.
- Snow- Happiness Excitement ( falling, Dropping)
- Water-Nervous ( Hard waves,Ice breaking )
- Avalanch-Scared ( Trees falling-Hard snow pushing)
- Ice- Coldness ( Ice being hard - Icicles falling on the ground)
- Clouds-
- Wind - Floating ( Clouds are ripping apart and making them into more clouds -
- Clouds are long)0o
- Walking up the hill to the mountain-
- (Those people hear the music and that is why they walk in slow mo)
The avalanche strong wind blew the big trees down and the trees broke
into half as soon as the strong wind blew the tree down to the ground.
into half as soon as the strong wind blew the tree down to the ground.
The People that were trying to do like some kinda Olympic winter games
I could see that they have their winter gear and helmets all they could hear was
music and when they heard the music
they decided to walk in slow motion.
I could see that they have their winter gear and helmets all they could hear was
music and when they heard the music
they decided to walk in slow motion.
The wind was hard very hard the wind would always take a little bit of snow and take it
away from the other snow
it is also like someone going to prison but away from there family.
away from the other snow
it is also like someone going to prison but away from there family.
I hope you like my work and I hope you liked it please give me a big comment below bye guys and girls.
